Author's Note- I started with a way longer journal response, but I shortened it down to this. At the beginning it was more of a list of things that relate to stones. Stones or writing on stones can have a lot of meaning behind it, like that it cant be erased, except for over time, when it is forgotten.
I really enjoyed reading this poem. This is a sweet poem, with a serious undertone at the same time. It is really casual until you get to the bit about the stones being as hard as life. The way you creatively placed the poem on top of the stones with words on them was also really cool, becasue as soon as I finished reading the poem, I wanted to see what words were there.
ReplyDeleteMan, this is super good. I love your poetic and mature voice. it didnt even matter that this poem was on the shorter side, because it was filled with meaning. nicee!!!
ReplyDeleteReally awsome! I especially liked the picture in the backround. I also like how it had a lot of meaning.
ReplyDeleteErin, you are amazing at writing poems kid! It was fantastic I really loved the ending! Good job!
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