Author's Note: One of the many amazing times. I tried to wirte about it, to see if you could see what we do when we are bored, and it just happened, and was a highlight at that time.
We were all at Jayla's house hanging out up in her room. It was morning. And we had been up for a little while. We could smell the pancakes cooking, and the bacon sizzling, but they weren't one yet! =( We were bored. (big surprise right), so we decided to call her house. Jayla is one of the most creative, loud, fun friends I have so she called. The phone rang and her mom picked up. She said hello, and Jayla responded in her Asian or something, voice, and started talking to her mom. She said her name was Bartholomew and kept talking looking for his aunt or something. When they were all done she hung up as Natalie, Jessi, and I were rolling on the floor laughing. We had to ask if she new it was us, so Jayla yelled down the stairs to her mom, "Who was that?" and her mom's reply was, "It was some little boy calling for his aunt or something!" That was the best part, but we had to tell her it was us. She was, a funny-mad at us, but she thought it was hilarious, as we came down to eat. That made waiting for breakfast a lot better, and we were still laughing at the table.
Tell me if that is any good. Or if I should write it differently, like a different person or something!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really funny story Erin, but I think you should make it a little more clear by using better voabulary and I don't know what else. Other than that it was really good!
ReplyDeleteThat must have been some kind of good impression! My brother tried that with my mom and he was really good but mom knew it was him. But I got mixed up at some parts because I didn't know what you were talking about.
ReplyDeleteOk I Will try to write it clearer, and use better vocabulary and it was really funny!
ReplyDeleteIt was hilarious Erin. I do agre you could make it better by making it clearer.
ReplyDeleteThat was really funny Erin...and a little confusing.
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