Author's Note: It was a really fun experience that, was easy to write about. Also people can probably relate somehow to this time.
Natalie, Jessi, and I were all hanging out in Natalie's back yard just like any other day. We were laughing talking, everything going good. I mean except for we are always mean to each other in a best friend funny way, but that doesn't count. Somehow we went from talking to spitting, and we start spitting at each other. Eww right, but thats too bad. So we stop for a second and start laughing again. Then just out of the blue Natalie spits at me, I open my mouth to scream, because I was really hiper so yeah. Guess what happens? Yeah she spits right into my mouth. That is just not right. They were laughing so hard at me and it wasn't even funny. It would be funny if it was someone else, but it was me so it wasn't. I end up on the ground laughing too. It was a funny, gross time, but still it was a great time.
Oh wow! That was hilarious and really gross at the same time! Excellent. Remind me never to open mu mouth when Natalie is getting ready to spit.
ReplyDeleteEeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwww! I totally agree with Mr.J in the fact that it was funny and gross. At least you didn't spit back at her. Be strong Erin!
ReplyDeleteThat's hilarious!
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Haha nice Erin. I think you could use some more descriptive language though because I noticed that you said "so yeah" a lot, but that is totally what you said. Remember, you are not just telling a story to somebody, this is a writing piece. Wow that sounded harsh; take that in a positive way! NICE JOB!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteEww. I'm kind of scared of Natalie now. :)
ReplyDeletewow. interesting. haha that sounds really funny and i would be cracking up so bad if i was with you.
ReplyDeletehaha that's mean Ryan, why would you be scared of me. I'm not mean to anyone besides Erin and Jessi, but that's just because I love them soooo much, but not in a weird way. What can I say, I have really good Erin
ReplyDeleteEwww, that's hilarious and disgusting at the same time. :) Reminds me of two of my friends from my old school, they would do something like this.
ReplyDeleteNats! Ickies! She's such an odd duckling. This was written very well but I agree with Alli on that you could use more descriptive vocabulary. However it does have that carefree funny sort of air to it, and I like it. Good job overall! Never tell Natalie of this conversation ;-) Kay?
ReplyDeleteToo late Alyssa. Also I will try to improve the vocab. THANKS!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow! That is very very interesting.... HAHAHA! That is so hilarious! I'm not really laughing out loud because my brother is sitting at the other computer in my computer room and he would think I'm crazy if I did but believe me, Erin, I'm laughing so very hard on the inside! This really reminds me of a time in first grade with one of my ex-best friends(she moved away) and it was not very pleasant hence the ex- part but that is a different story!
ReplyDeleteThat would totally stink! That's so funny at the same time though! Use more vocabulary like everyone said, but great job.
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